《人人都能用英语》一书中有些值得商榷的地方

The first book to be introduced is Cambridge Advanced English Grammar, by Raymond Murphy (Foreign Language Teaching and Research Press). The Foreign Language Teaching and Research Press published it, and it is not clear whether it is appropriate to say "the first book" in the context of the introduction of the Langenscheidt English Grammar, and whether it is necessary to repeat the publisher twice.